Wednesday, 11 January 2012

Drifter

My mind drifts endlessly like a piece of paper

Blown here and there by the errant weather

Sometimes it lands on the bright orange flowers nodding merrily at me

and sometimes on children playing, careless and free.

Sometimes it settles on the frail old lady staring vacantly,

Wonder what she is thinking or is it a silent plea?

Sometimes it goes down the memory lane

And settles on yesterdays' fun in the rain,

Where life was all about meeting friends;

And mooning about future career and trends.

Where one moment of fun was not about being someone,

But being there for someone was rather more fun

My mind drifts aimlessly here and there

Finally it's forced to settle on the silly machine that I stare

And gives me a reality check, so there.

Cant wait to be that piece of paper again;

Where I can wander aimlessly now and then!

~Piyali~

9 comments:

  1. simple, beautiful, and meaningful lines! would like to read more such pieces. :)

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  3. I agree with Divoo. These lines are simple, and straight from the heart! What could be better and purer? Piyali, we all have minds which drift around like a piece of paper...but hopefully the piece of paper will always settle on happy things, and things which will help us grow, in our life's journey. Well done, and yes, keep the lines coming in!

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  4. Thanks Ruma di...for these encouraging words...hopefully it will set the pace for long-lost creative writing :)

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  5. Very nicely written, Piyali. Glad Rumadi told me of you and your work... this is very good indeed! Hope to connect via FB,
    Mimi

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  6. Thanks so much Mimi :)...yes Ruma di told me about you. Would like to read some of your pieces too and hope to connect via fb.

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  7. Nice analogy, and loved the simple lines that were easy to connect with :)

    Should it be "Blown here and there by the errant wind" maybe? Also, consider replacing mooning since it has another popular meaning.

    Hoping to read more of your work!
    -vijay

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  8. thanks so much vijay...and thanks for your constructive feedback too..used the word weather just to rhyme with paper but I agree, 'wind' could have been a better usage :)

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